poezii .....

your fine skin, glimmering dim
... still smells like him
your blood, along the floor
is still warm and thirsts for more

i couldn't give you what you wanted
you couldn't love me like i needed
now you're drenched in pain
silently crying in vain

laying down, besides your chest
laid forever, laid to rest
stands a rose, so clear, so red
left not one more leaf to shed

beneath its crimson coat of red
hide the tears that it has bled
lost forever in their times
fled along their wicked vines

gone forever...

ce super e :X:X:X:X:X

cel mai mult imi place strofa a III-a!! imi plac trandafirii
e foarte frumoasa!! imi plac poeziile in genu!! :X:X:X:X

ai foarte mult talent

frumos...y in engleza...avem poezii internatzionale p aici deci...e sooper.Felicitari!

poi.... vad ca deja s-au strans doua commuri.... ><.....

o sa mai pun una.... sper sa va placa.....(asta e scrisa 50%de mine 50% de "fratele" meu)

i would really like to see
you bent backwards just like me
rearranged by their desires
led in fires
by their wires

i would like to feel you...
shattered and cold
left behind your story's fold
suffering, blleding, choking
form all the pride you're holding

i would like to see you... flying
and above all of us lying
ready to fall, standing you ground
i would like you going down
and just as you reach the bottom
make no sound just be forgotten

i would like to hear...
your bones snap, your tissues tear
your heart gently beat in fear
that is when i'd like to see
your eyes look again at me
your soft skin still touching mine
and your heart, beating like mine

i would like you...
here, forgotten, dead, alone
free outside yet chained at home
cursed by all the pain you've caused
soaked in red
for what you've bred
soaked in blood
for you're all mud
filth and bitter
... go and wither

i would like to hear you...
i would like to feel you...
i would like to see you...
i would like you...

break, cold, suffer, dead


(~hope u like it:D)

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i would like to hear...
your bones snap, your tissues tear
your heart gently beat in fear
that is when i'd like to see
your eyes look again at me
your soft skin still touching mine
and your heart, beating like mine

imi place la nebunie strofa asta!!!!!

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and your heart, beating like mine

ai talent nu gluma!!!!!
mai pune!!!

bitte?? please??

sunt superbe.poeziile tale sunt asa dark.si ai niste imagini mirifice.ce'ar fi sa'ti scoti un volum de poezii:-"...^^

stiu nu am un frate...dar daca erai mai atenta am pus frate intre ghilimele..... si cred ca le'ai mai citit pt ca mi se pare ca ti le'am dat sa le citesti....(lol...ce rea ejti...)

atunci who is your"FRATE"?)

ff dragutzr poeziile tale si ale "FRATELUI" tau

welll.... am deja 4 commuri...... mai pun inca o poezie:D

La capete inima se termina'n artere
Omul cel mai bine'ntelege ce numiti voi... durere
Iar eu te'nteleg pe tine
Cel mai bine
Arterele devin capilare si'apoi vene'ajung
Voi dezgropa securea urii
Cu care'am sa le strapung
Voi pluti intr'un ocean inexistent
De durere
Far'a fi purtat de vreo'un curent
Te urasc !!!!
Insa latent
Mor, innecat in umor, ironic
Devin un simbol... gol, fara vlaga
Viermii din interiorul meu se hranesc
De'ndata ce plutesc
Pe aripile ingerilor negri
Mai integri
Decat noi, decat tine
Fara viata mi'e mai bine..

deci ai talent!!!!!

jos palaria!!!!


e super si poezia asta!!!!

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Voi pluti intr'un ocean inexistent
De durere
Far'a fi purtat de vreo'un curent
Te urasc !!!!

ce-mi plashe partea asta!!!!


hai inca una please!!!!